The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

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The paragraph contains information about the fan following of five well-known

people

Instagram

between 2018 and 2021.

Overall

, Win all the figures taken into consideration, it can be vividly seen that the maximum fan following obtained by Cristiano Ronaldo

while

remaining for

people

has the least popularity on

Instagram

in the given period. Analysing the bar graph, it can be seen clearly that the fan following of Cristiano Ronaldo on

Instagram

was around 100

million

in 2018

whereas

this

trend experienced a sharp rise and increased by 210

million

followers and stabbled at almost 320

million

followers.the popularity of the rock and Ariana Grande was around 95

million

and 1 110

million

in 2018 respectively.In the case of 2021, both trends were identical it was around 250

million

people

Further

, the bar graph shows that the audience of Selena Gomez was around 20

million

more than Kylie Jenner in 2018 on

Instagram

. The growth of followers in both

Instagram

accounts was almost similar in 2021 which was

also

around 250

million

people

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

174 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Bar chart
Instagram account
Popularity
Follower count
Trend
Increase/Decrease
Comparison
Content type
Influencer
Social media
Growth
Pattern
Significant change

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