The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The paragraph contains information about the fan following of five well-known
people
on Instagram
between 2018 and 2021.
Overall
, Win all the figures taken into consideration, it can be vividly seen that the maximum fan following obtained by Cristiano Ronaldo while
remaining for people
has the least popularity on Instagram
in the given period.
Analysing the bar graph, it can be seen clearly that the fan following of Cristiano Ronaldo on Instagram
was around 100 million
in 2018 whereas
this
trend experienced a sharp rise and increased by 210 million
followers and stabbled at almost 320 million
followers.the popularity of the rock and Ariana Grande was around 95 million
and 1 110 million
in 2018 respectively.In the case of 2021, both trends were identical it was around 250 million
people
.
Further
, the bar graph shows that the audience of Selena Gomez was around 20 million
more than Kylie Jenner in 2018 on Instagram
. The growth of followers in both Instagram
Instagram
accounts was almost similar in 2021 which was also
around 250 million
people
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