describe a graph that shows average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, globalisers and non-globalisers.

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This

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graph illustrates the average growth in Gross Domestic Product (GDP) yearly in rich countries,

globalisers

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globalised

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non-globalisers

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non-globalised

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, it is given that in four decades, there is a strong indication that

this

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chart displays unpredictable growth and frequent fluctuations. There is no chart which shows consistent behaviour.

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can be seen throughout the different improvements that are put to influence the charts. In 1960. Wealthy countries

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peak at around 4,5% before having a significant decline to 3.0%

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continuing

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decline to 2.0%.

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, globalisers

starts

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off the chart relatively low at just above 1.0%,

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gradually

increasing

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numbers before reaching

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all-time high in 1990 at slightly under 5.0%.

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, the non-globalisers

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various changes. It starts at just above 2.0%,

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reaching

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around 3.0%

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1970s

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, to

reducing

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to under 1.0% before adjusting to

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above 1.0% in the end year.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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describe a graph that shows average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, globalisers and non-globalisers.

An increase in production of consumer goods results in damage of the natural environment. What are the causes and possible solutions?

Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kinds of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?

An overseas friend wants to visit your country on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •Recommend the best time of year to visit and why •Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose •Say what you would like to show your friend in your country