Some parents believe that reading entertainment books is a waste of time. In their opinion, children should only read severe educational books. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer, and include relevant examples from your own experience.

It is said to be a waste of time
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fiction books,
according to
hundreds of parents concerned about
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of their prole. They think true knowledge
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from educational books and must be compulsory
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read
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of things. In
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essay, I will elucidate my disagreement with that statement based on my beliefs.
To begin
with,
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educational encyclopedias can be
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intriguing task for the kids, leading to
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a boring activity
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which most of them can't put up with.
For instance
, in my city two
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of students actually enjoy formal text as a hobby, the others claim that they could assume
this
activity enjoyable if those
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were comics or fiction novels.
Hence
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interpret
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from non-fiction text is a good beginning in the lecture skills of
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infants.
In addition
, mangas, comics, and graphic novels can enhance cognitive skills
due to
intrinsic complexity. Combine
this
with the motivation and interest of
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young,
as a result
, their imagination, knowledge, and learning processes can be accelerated with astonishing consequences. As a sample, in my
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there is a kid
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started reading 'Hamler', he loved the story and preferred to go deeper into medieval literature. He finished reading the trilogy of Tolkien 'The Lord of the Rings' just when he was nine years old. Incredibly he understood
easier
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important
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at school
such
as geography, linguistics, character development,
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intelligence and
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a lot of words that no educational books would do.
To sum up
, I don't disregard articles and objectives lectures, but the aforementioned notions I described give another perspective, and I disagree completely with the idea of not considering fantasy and imaginative lectures as a way of education, I
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parents to use the benefits of the entertained education.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cognitive development
  • literary fiction
  • non-fiction texts
  • critical thinking
  • analytical skills
  • empathy
  • genre diversity
  • pedagogical approach
  • intrinsic motivation
  • reading retention
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