The map show the changes that taken placee since 1962 until today. describe it

The map show the changes that taken placee since 1962 until today. describe it
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The image above shows the comparison of three maps and the changes that have taken place in
Meadowside
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Village and Fonton, a neighbouring town. It compares the town's condition in 1962, 1985, and the current state. The map’s common elements, albeit in different measures, include fonton, a
meadowside
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village, a housing estate, a hotel, a station, and a business park.
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, a lot of new construction was built in
meadowside
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villages. Several elements were added between 1962 to 1985,
such
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as a leisure complex, a housing estate, and a superstore. The main roads were built between 1962 and 1985
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and
then
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remained unchanged until now.
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, other elements that
also
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remain the same from 1985 to the current map are the position of the housing estate, leisure complex, and superstore. Upon detailed observation, new buildings were built between 1985 to its current state,
such
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as a hotel, a station, and a business park.
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, the
meadowside
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village changed into a suburb and is increasingly expanding its land space, connecting both neighbouring towns together.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Vocabulary: Replace the words meadowside with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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