The bar chart below shows the number of films produced of five countries in three years

The bar chart below shows the number of films produced of five countries in three years
The bar chart illustrates data about the number of film productions from five different countries (
labeled
Change the spelling
labelled
show examples
A-E) over the 3-year period.
Overall
,
it is clear that
country A had the highest number of
films
in three
years
. It is
also
notable that A witnessed a decline,
while
countries B,C, and E were the opposite and D had fluctuations.
According to
the diagram, A has the highest value, just below 90 and remained the same for one more year before a small reduction in 2009.
In contrast
with A, C started at the lowest place with 9
films
in total,
however
,
this
country rose steadily in the next two
years
and produced almost 20
films
in 2009. As regards remaining figures , from 2007 to 2009, B saw a spectacular growth in making
films
, from 50
movies
in 2007 to 70
movies
in 2009, a rise of 20
movies
in 2
years
. The same trend appeared in E, which produced 9
movies
in the year 2007, which increased moderately to 12
movies
in 2
years
.
In addition
, D witnessed erratic values, 15
movies
in 2007, dropped suddenly in 2008 and rose up again in 2009 with 12
movies
.
Submitted by nguyetcat.dao on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words films, years, movies with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: