The bar chart below shows the number of films produced of five countries in three years

The bar chart below shows the number of films produced of five countries in three years
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The bar chart illustrates data about the number of film productions from five different countries (
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A-E) over the 3-year period.
Overall
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it is clear that
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country A had the highest number of
films
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in three
years
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. It is
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notable that A witnessed a decline,
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countries B,C, and E were the opposite and D had fluctuations.
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the diagram, A has the highest value, just below 90 and remained the same for one more year before a small reduction in 2009.
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with A, C started at the lowest place with 9
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in total,
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,
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country rose steadily in the next two
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and produced almost 20
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in 2009. As regards remaining figures , from 2007 to 2009, B saw a spectacular growth in making
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, from 50
movies
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in 2007 to 70
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in 2009, a rise of 20
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in 2
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. The same trend appeared in E, which produced 9
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in the year 2007, which increased moderately to 12
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in 2
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, D witnessed erratic values, 15
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in 2007, dropped suddenly in 2008 and rose up again in 2009 with 12
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