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The diagram below shows how rainwater is reused Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how rainwater is reused Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram describes the stages in the
lifepan
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life
 of
rainwater
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. The process consists of many steps, beginning with
raining
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 and finishing with stormwater
treatment
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 and excess treated
water
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are
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moves into
river
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the river
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. First of all,
rainwater
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 is stored in
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rainwater
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a rainwater
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 tank or dam after
raining
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.
Then
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,
rainwater
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 in
dam
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the dam
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 is transported to
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water
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the water
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treatment
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plant
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,
here
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where
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 the conversion of
rainwater
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 into drinking
water
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 is treated. After that, drinking
water
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 from
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water
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the water
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treatment
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plant
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 is supplied for
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household
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households
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while
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rainwater
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 from
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rainwater
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the rainwater
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 tank and recycled
water
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 from
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wastewater
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the wastewater
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treatment
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plant
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 are
also
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 distributed for the demand of people. At the following stage,
household
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wastewater
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 is moved to
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wastewater
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the wastewater
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treatment
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plant
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. At
this
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 place,
wastewater
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 is treated and separated into recycled
water
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 and excess treated
water
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. The latter is moved back to
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household
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the household
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 to serve residents,
the
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and the
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 former and stormwater
treatment
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 from
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household
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the household
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 are dumped into
river
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the river
a river
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rainwater, treatment, water, plant, household, wastewater with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "moves" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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