The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by a hand.

The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by a hand.
The diagram represents the
process
of making a
violin
by hand. There are serval
process
Fix the agreement mistake
processes
show examples
to make a
violin
. I will explain the
process
in the following paragraphs.
Overall
, it is observed the
process
of making a
violin
starts with a thin piece of wood and some additional tools are used to make a
violin
such
as a saw, glue, ribs, varnish and so on. To start, we have to select the thin piece of wood which is easy to cut by using a saw
then
move on to the next
process
the wood piece is divided into two
parts
that is
front
and back
parts
. In the next step, we should design the
front
part of a
violin
, a cutting tool and an f-hole should be designed;
then
using glue we have to fix the bass bar and the
front
part. The fifth step is we have to design the handle, we should take unshaped rib strips and we should fix them on the handle with the help of a heating tool and
then
again with the help of glue and ribs we should fix the
front
and back
parts
together. The body of the
violin
is ready, and the handle with the neck and scroll is
also
ready. We have to assemble all the
parts
together and additional
parts
should
also
be assembled to get a
violin
structure. Varnish may be used to paint the
violin
.
Finally
, the
process
of a
violin
is ready to use.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, violin, parts, front with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • luthier
  • artisanal
  • acoustical properties
  • seasoning (of wood)
  • carving
  • meticulous
  • sculpting
  • varnish
  • durability
  • signature (in the context of uniqueness)
  • assembly
  • optimization
  • craftsmanship
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