The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by a hand.
The diagram represents the
process
of making a violin
by hand. There are serval process
to make a Fix the agreement mistake
processes
violin
. I will explain the process
in the following paragraphs.
Overall
, it is observed the process
of making a violin
starts with a thin piece of wood and some additional tools are used to make a violin
such
as a saw, glue, ribs, varnish and so on.
To start, we have to select the thin piece of wood which is easy to cut by using a saw then
move on to the next process
the wood piece is divided into two parts
that is
front
and back parts
. In the next step, we should design the front
part of a violin
, a cutting tool and an f-hole should be designed; then
using glue we have to fix the bass bar and the front
part. The fifth step is we have to design the handle, we should take unshaped rib strips and we should fix them on the handle with the help of a heating tool and then
again with the help of glue and ribs we should fix the front
and back parts
together.
The body of the violin
is ready, and the handle with the neck and scroll is also
ready. We have to assemble all the parts
together and additional parts
should also
be assembled to get a violin
structure. Varnish may be used to paint the violin
. Finally
, the process
of a violin
is ready to use.Submitted by insighttribez on
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