The table and charts below give information participants who have entered the Olymics since it began.

The table and charts below give information participants who have entered the Olymics since it began.
The bar chart compares the
number
of males and females who participated in the Olympics from 1952 to 2012. Meanwhile, the line graph illustrates the inclining trend of
participants
in the same years shown by the bar graph.
Overall
, both men and women
Olympians
had upward trends which contributed to the trend shown in the line chart. Over the given periods, Male
participants
dominated the data and had never been surpassed by female
participants
. The domination of men happened from the very beginning at 3000
people
in 1924. The
number
then
rose consistently to 4500 and 5000
people
in 1952 and 1984. In 2012, male
participants
still dominated the data at 6000
people
. Meanwhile, Female
Olympians
started with a significant gap which did not seem comparable to Males. There were less than 100 female
Olympians
in 1924. The
number
went 5 times bigger in the next 28 years at 500
people
then
managed to reach 1500
people
in 1984. In 2012, it had a tremendous increase which made the gap with male
participants
closer at just 1200
people
. With the trend happening to both genders, the total
number
of
participants
increased from 1924 to 2012. The data started at around 3000 and reached almost 11,000
Olympians
. At a glance, the more significant increasing rate happened between 1984 to 2012, than 1924 to 1984.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, participants, olympians, people with synonyms.
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