Some say children should be disciplined at an early age. Others , however, feel this is not a good idea. Discuss both these view and give your opinion.
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I would like to mention that, childhood is the period when one baby can learn what is right and what is wrong. Since they have no knowledge about Add a comma
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rules
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Last
but not least, early age is the perfect spell to realize the value of time
. In addition
, childhood is the best period to learn about the advantages of timing and disadvantages of mistiming.
On the other hand
, some people have different opinion
regarding the topic. They believe infancy may not be the best Fix the agreement mistake
opinions
time
for learning discipline
. Whereas
they have enough time
to learn it. From their point of view, infancy is a very sensitive phase of
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To sum up
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