the charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make cmparisons where relevant.

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The line charts provide information about the percentage of households with three types of electrical appliances and the consumption of time washing clothes, preparing meals, and cleaning in one country from 1920 to 2019.

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perspective, the proportion of households had

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great growth during the period,

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there was a sharp fall in the number of hours of housework per week over the whole period. looking in more detail, the refrigerator rose rapidly from 0% in 1920

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to 100% in 1980,

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stayed the same until

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, there was a dramatic increase of around 30% in 1920, until reached

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in 2000 of 100% respectively. As for washing machines, the percentage

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increased slightly to approximately 40% in 2000, with a small dip of around 65% in 1980,

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they still managed to rise as time went by,

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not significantly. one notable point, regarding the number of hours per week, there was a slight climb of almost 50% in 1920 , before falling sharply to around 15% in 1980,

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remained relatively levelled out until 2019.

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