Some people believe that in a city, the best way to travel is by car, while other people argue that bicycles are a better way of travelling in a city. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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bicycles
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families
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cities
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health
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there
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cities
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provided
provide
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governments
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structure
Please ensure that your essay has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. The introduction should outline the key points, the body should discuss both sides of the argument in separate paragraphs, and the conclusion should summarize your opinion effectively.
paragraph structure
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connectivity
Use a range of connectives and transition words to improve the flow of ideas between sentences and paragraphs.
argument consistency
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task achievement
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vocabulary use
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