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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#people #health #future
On average, regular
people
's
health
 might be lower in the future, compared to
people
's current
health
 level currently. I believe that
this
 opinion is logically true because the advancement of
food
 and technology can affect biological molecules and cells. As the main fuel for the body,
food
 significantly impacts on the system in the human body. More varieties of
food
 are invented these days,
thus
 it gradually shifts how our body responds and digests the
food
. Not only the type of
food
 but
also
 the source of the main ingredients can be another issue which can change the current human digestive system. Many cutting-edge tools or knowledge are used to catalyze the reproduction of
food
 ingredients, so the farmer can harvest their crops faster or the stockman can grow their livestock in a shorter time.
This
 innovation somehow benefits the salesman to get more profit.
However
,
this
 method can affect the genes of the cells eventually because biotechnology is mainly used the genetic manipulation to foster the growth of crops or animals.
This
 technique utilizes a chemical substance, which is definitely not a natural one, that can be harmful to our bodies in the long run.
This
 modification in our genes can trigger the cancer cell to reproduce and start to spread.
Consequently
, If
people
 keep using these practices,
people
's
health
 in the next several years will get in trouble easier than before. In conclusion, from my perspective, I predict that normal
people
's
health
 in the future is going to be lower than the current one because of the fast growth of
food
 and technology. The current method in biotechnology is deemed to be harmful to our bodies
at the end
 of the day.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Standard of health
  • 2. Average
  • 3. Lower
  • 4. Future
  • 5. Aging population
  • 6. Chronic diseases
  • 7. Sedentary lifestyle
  • 8. Lack of exercise
  • 9. Poor dietary habits
  • 10. Environmental pollution
  • 11. Technological advancements
  • 12. Impact on health
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