write a thankful letter

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January 17, 2025 Dear Thi, I am so
greatful
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grateful
for your
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faithful
generosity
this
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winter. Thank you so much for the way you
dispalyed
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displayed
deep care and compassion to vulnerable kids and
families
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in Calgary! For
families
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who are struggling,
Christmas
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can be a very difficult time of year. Parents who
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are finding it difficult to provide for their children feel extra financial strain and pressure. Vulnerable kids watch their classmates bring hearty lunches
ro
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to
school and
pretented
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pretended
pretend
they aren't hungry when they don't have lunch for the day. But because of your monthly gift of compassion. hungry kids were fed.
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Anxious
parents
recieved
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received
food hampers and were able to pick out toys for their children so their
families
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could experience a special
Christmas
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together. And
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it all, the joy and hope of
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shone like a light in a dark time-
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to your generosity. I have prepared and attached a special report for you to hear
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a few of the many people who were blessed by you
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thus
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this
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Christmas
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. These
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are
your stories of hope
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and
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my
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prayers
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is that they encourage you as much as they have
encourged
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encouraged
me. As a monthly donor, your generosity brought hope , joy, and peace to vulnerable
families
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this
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Christmas
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. Thank you so much! May God bless you for your kindness. Joe Nikkel -Executive Director
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Language Accuracy
Be mindful in ensuring accuracy in spelling and punctuation for a polished final draft.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter displays a clear logical structure, progressing from expressing gratitude to describing the impact of the donor's generosity.
Coherence and Cohesion
It opens and closes with an appropriate greeting and closing, giving the letter a professional and warm tone.
Coherence and Cohesion
Each paragraph conveys a single, focused idea, contributing to the overall clarity of the letter.
Task Achievement
The letter completes the task of expressing thanks in a detailed and specific manner, highlighting the impact of the recipient's contributions.
Task Achievement
The writing tone is warm, professional, and appropriately grateful, fitting the purpose of the letter.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bilingual
  • multilingual
  • fluency
  • communicate
  • cognitive skills
  • cultural awareness
  • opportunities
  • globalized world
  • job market
  • interact
  • linguistic abilities
  • cultural exchange
  • language proficiency
  • language barrier
  • foreign travel
  • personal growth
  • academic achievement
  • self-confidence
  • enhance
  • cross-cultural communication
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