You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter •tell them when you will be arriving and leaving •explain what type of rooms you would like, and ask how much the weekend will cost •ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to demonstrate my interest in spending a weekend, which will start on 22 Feb, at your
hotel
.
I hope this
letter finds you well. Me and my family, my wife and our two kids, have planned to stay at your hotel
for two nights from 22 to 24 Feb. We will be at the hotel
around 5pm.
I should let you know, that we prefer a room with an ocean view, and due to
my kids' age, one of them three and the other one five, I would like to ask for a room with four beds. It would be perfect if you could provide me with the cost of our desired accommodation.
Please let me know if there are any particular activities around the hotel
which suit my family, my children in particular
. In addition
, I would like to ask for a daycare centre near the hotel
which accept
our kids for four hours on Saturday, Change the verb form
accepts
while
I and my wife will have to go to a concert .
I am looking forward to your prompt answer.
Yours sincerely
Ali ASubmitted by ali on
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task achievement
To improve task achievement, ensure that you address all parts of the prompt. Your letter comprehensively addresses the queries presented in the task, but for maximum scores, you could add a little more detail about the types of activities or specific interests of your family to tailor the inquiries about activities and places of interest more specifically.
coherence cohesion
For coherence and cohesion, consider linking sentences and paragraphs more smoothly by using a wider range of linking words and phrases. Although your letter is well-structured, using transitional phrases such as 'Furthermore', 'In addition to the above', and 'Regarding' could enhance the flow of information.
task achievement
When writing formal letters, it’s generally best to avoid contractions ('I am' instead of 'I'm') to maintain a formal tone throughout. While your tone is generally suitable, maintaining this consistency will ensure the highest marks for writing tone.
coherence cohesion
Ensure grammatical accuracy for an improved overall impression. For instance, 'Me and my family' should be 'My family and I'. Minor corrections like this can have a significant positive impact on the perceived quality of your writing.