In many countries today, crime novels and TV crimes dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

The popularity of crime entertainment has seen a significant surge over the past decade, as it is evident in the worldwide popularity of crime movies, series, and novels.
Although
there are other genres that provide interesting
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, nothing can compare with the plot twist in violent movies.
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genre has
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to attract
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lots of fans
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since it delivers tense
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with conspiracy theories. Despite less people favor
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violent scenes like
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murderer
murder
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and fights, it still
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viewers to follow the storyline and
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the mystery.
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, a movie called The Orient Express is one of the
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masterpiece
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, it understood the
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built-in
dramatic possibilities of people doing things to murder the victim
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and turns out the eleven passengers are working together to
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killed
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the victim which was the real
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villain
.
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this
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individuals as they feel included in the scenario.
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, in my opinion,
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watching
this
type of entertainment can
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us smarter.
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is because the majority of those books and films are based on true events.
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II, and I
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a wide extent of knowledge about the history of
this
war. In fact, there is a large extent of novels that
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by war and politics from the past;
consequently
,
this
would increase our knowledge and stimulate interest
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everything, especially about the
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ancient history. In conclusion, the reasons why our community
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this
type of entertainment are not only the stunning
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horror
aspect
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but
also
the story background could stimulate viewers’ intelligence.
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, I believe that
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still worth
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enjoy
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the
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bloody violence.
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