In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunities to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Over the
last
two or three decades, the international
student's
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ratio has increased as compared to the past. In the past days,
student
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the student
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used to study their native
land
but now they get a degree from
the
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foreign
land
.
This
phenomenon has benefits and drawbacks;
this
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
To begin
with, there are several advantages of studying in abroad. One of the main advantages is that many foreign universities provide plenty of scholarships to
the
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pupils who have more interest
to enhance
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their knowledge through
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a degree
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degree
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,
as a result
, numerous domestic learners like to
enroll
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the foreign
nations
to use the scholarship.
For example
, more than 60% of
the
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apply
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Asian learners prefer to get admission
from
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to
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the
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apply
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developed
nations
with
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by
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using
scholarship
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scholarships
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. Another benefit is that studying
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for the
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the
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a
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degree in a foreign country brings more employment opportunities after finishing the course with reasonable salary and incentives so pupils after completing their school education
and
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they
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apply
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prefer to get admission from the developed
nations
. Despite these benefits, there are some drawbacks
of
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this
phenomenon. One of the main disadvantages is that
learning
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studying in
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a foreign nation to get
degrees
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a degrees
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more
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is more
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expensive than domestic country because
accomodation
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accommodation
and personal expenses price is more higher.
For instance
, Australia is
more
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a more
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expensive country for
the
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international students so numerous students
who
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from
under developing
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underdeveloped
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nations
suffer
to manage
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from managing
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all these. Another disadvantage is that some students will get
home sickness
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homesickness
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when they
are moving
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to other
nations
for their higher education because they miss their immediate family members and friends,
consequently
, they might affect depression and isolation.
To conclude
,
although
getting scholarships from developer
nations
and plenty of employment chances are the merits of studying in abroad
instead
of domestic
land
, spending too much on accommodation in foreign
land
and getting
homesickness
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are the demerits of
this
phenomenon.
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