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favorite subjects The bar chart shows information about the favorite subjects of students from two middle schools, school A and school B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

favorite subjects The bar chart shows information about the favorite subjects of students from two middle schools, school A and school B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart depicts the most likely
subject
 of pupils in different intermediate
schools
,
schools
 A and
schools
 B. By and large, both
schools
 have huge differences
between
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in
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 the
favored
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favoured
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 topics by the pupils.
To begin
 with,
school
 A has a dominant sports concern, with a hefty
thirty six
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thirty-six
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students
 claiming it as the most popular
subject
,
while
 craft or drawing
being
Wrong verb form
is
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 the least popular
subject
 by the pupils. Not only craft
,
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apply
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 but
also
 language being the second of less
unfavorable
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unfavourable
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 subjects by the
students
.
Move
Wrong verb form
Moving
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 to
school
 B, the special
subject
 picked by the
students
 is
craft
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crafts
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 or drawing,
moreover
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moreover,
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 science is the least loved
subject
 by the
students
 with only two
persons
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people
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chosen
Wrong verb form
choosing
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 it,
while
 in
school
 A, science was the second most popular
subject
 which counted 9 scholars. Compared to
school
 B,
school
 A
have
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has
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 slightly different proportions of social science lovers. In conclusion, the two middle
schools
 have totally different preferences for the course of study.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words subject, schools, school, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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