Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Thanks to progress, people around the world do not feel a lack of choices related to any area of life. I truly believe that as more choices we have, as more evolutionary directions we gain. But,
such
variety makes some people depressed and anxious, while
other opens up new horizons to themselves which were not obvious before. I will expand my thoughts regarding the topic in this
essay.
Let's model the situation when a person
wants to buy a car. A buyer spends plenty of time analyzing the market and already spent a couple of months. While
he or she was trying to find the most fitted one, a new model was released. Thus
, the person
started doing the same things again by reading the specs, and comparing the benefits and drawbacks of the car to the previous ones. So it looks like an infinite loop. Having said that, it would probably be beneficial for a person
just to buy a car earlier and become a happy owner omitting the stress while
choosing.
On the other hand
, for example
, if you have decided to change jobs but have no idea where to move, it will be less painful to do so by having a wide range of offers available. In the modern days, a lot of human resources agencies are presented on the stage providing a different kind of occupations. You are welcome to choose any of those you may be successful in. There are a lot of examples when a person
quit his profession because of a feeling of doing something meaningless and finally
finds himself in a different topic. Being able to choose can improve our lives.
In conclusion, If it brings difficulties, then
it makes sense just to stop at some point in time and make a final decision about what is actually required. Overall
, it is really great we have the ability and opportunity to choose from.Submitted by serginio.nick on
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Coherence and Cohesion/Task Achievement
Your essay has a clear introduction and conclusion which lays out your view and summarizes it well. However, the development of paragraphs should be more logically structured with clear topic sentences to introduce the main ideas. In terms of task achievement, make sure each paragraph contribution is directly aligned with the question prompt. To enhance clarity further, consider expanding your ideas and ensure they are fully explored before moving to the next point. Lastly, integrating more specific examples that directly support your view would strengthen your argument and overall task achievement.