The diagrams below show changes that have taken place in the Sawry District neighbourhood since 1920.
This
pair of maps depicts
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depict
change
over the course of a century in the Sawry District
neighborhood
by showing the area in 1920 and 2020. Change the spelling
neighbourhood
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that many developmental changes occurred in the Swary District
during the given years.
The overall
change
in the neighborhood
is one of growth. It is interesting to notice that by 2020 there were more businesses, more housing, and greater public services. Change the spelling
neighbourhood
However
, not all businesses and services remained intact after 1920.Business and housing saw the most change
and growth. The cannery present in 1920 was replaced by an office complex. Two of the houses near the Elmwood River were demolished and replaced by a road and an apartment complex. It is noticeable that the
Oak Avenue went from having two houses and a shop to having three houses, two shops, an apartment complex, and a petrol station.
On one hand, it is evident that the Correct article usage
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change
in public services was less significant than the change
in housing and businesses. The Prestwich Primary School was demolished and then
rebuilt as a bigger school, closer to Oak Street’s shops. On the other hand
, Elmwood River gained a bridge and a bike path, the latter of which replaced the small beach seen on the 1920 map.
In conclusion, it is crystal clear that Swary District
had
witnessed plenty of developments to become a modern Wrong verb form
has
district
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