The graph and bart chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa

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of temperature in every

month

over the

year

,

while

the bar chart expresses the amount of

rainfall

which was averaged each

month

for 1

year

.

Overall

it is clear that

the degree of

rainfall

and temperature were relatively similar and their value

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related

to each other, in

this

case, they fluctuated over the 12 months.

According to

the first graph, the

number of

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temperature stood at 22.0

degrees

in January, and

then

it had a drastic increase to over 23.5 in

next

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2 months where it was the hottest climate of the

year

.

After

this

, it dropped dramatically to nearly 20.5

degrees

in July.

Next,

there was a significant rise again to 23.5

degrees

.

In

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the end of the

year

, it experienced a considerable decrease to below 21.5

degrees

. Turning to the bar chart, the average amount of

rainfall

started at 25

millimetres

in the first

month

. In March, there was a sharp growth in the

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rainfall

to 100

millimetres

and

then

it reached a peak at 275

millimetres

in April.

However

, it suddenly declined to 20

millimetres

and it remained relatively constant for 4 months. It had a big amount of increase again to 150

millimetres

in October and

slighly

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slightly

grew to above 150

millimetres

in November. In

last

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month

of the period, there was a

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fall in the

rainfall

level to 50

millimetres

.