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: More and more countries have a problem with plastic waste, polluting the countryside and ocean. What problems does it cause? How can these problems be solved?

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In
this
 contemporary era, a considerable amount of countries have a problem with the
usage
 of
plastic
 as it leads to pollution mainly towards the scenery area and seas.
This
 essay shall discuss both the causes and remedies for
this
 problem in the ensuing paragraphs. To commence with, it is an inevitable fact that, almost all countries use
plastic
 profusely in their daily routine. The major reason behind
that is
 the cost of elastic materials is considerably more cheaper and reliable for a long period of time.
Besides
, moulded products give security and longevity so, in that case, people might get tired of using them and throw them away on a daily basis.
Moreover
, many nations widely use
plastic
 in every field which is most likely to be dumped in the ocean and countryside areas.
Hence
,
this
 leads to detrimental effects on sea species and water.
Furthermore
, if it is dumped into the landscaped
then
 it may degrade the
usage
 of land and propagate the pollution.
For instance
,
according to
 one report the leh City was fully immersed in
plastic
 disposed of by the tourist in the year 2019.
On the other hand
, the Government should implement some policies to get rid of
plastic
usage
 in each country. which can be done by either investing in recycling machines or finding alternatives for
plastic
usage
such
 as paper , or cloth bags. To exemplify, In the UK almost all the wander are using paper bags for their customers.
In addition
, the government can organise awareness programs.
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introduction&conclusion
Ensure that your essay starts with an introduction that clearly paraphrases the question and outlines the structure of the essay. In your conclusion, restate the main points and provide a definitive final thought.
coherence
Use a range of linking words and phrases to connect ideas more clearly. Try to avoid repetition of words and phrases to increase the cohesion of the essay.
task response
Provide more specific examples and evidence to support your points. Make sure that these examples are directly related to the topic to demonstrate clear relevance.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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