The table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002
The table displays
deta
on Correct your spelling
details
percentage
Correct article usage
the percentage
on
national consumer expenditure Change preposition
of
on
three categories in five countries in 2002 .
Change preposition
in
overall
, Linking Words
while
the vast Linking Words
majoratiy
of people spending Correct your spelling
majority
are
on food/drinks/tobacco, leisure/education is the least one .
in 2002 Turkey and Ireland Change the verb form
is
have
the greatest percentage of consumer expenditure Wrong verb form
had
in
food/drinks/tobacco Change preposition
on
in
32.14 and 28.91 Change preposition
at
recpectively
. Correct your spelling
respectively
Linking Words
however
Turkey Add a comma
however,
also
led the leisure/education in 4.35 Linking Words
percentage
.
Replace the word
per cent
while
Italy had the Linking Words
high
proportion in clothing/footwear, Correct word choice
highest
Span
had the least proportion in leisure/education at 9.00 and 1.98 respectively .Correct your spelling
Spain
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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