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Do you popularity of online education has grown significantly in recent years Do you think this is a positive or negative development ?

#popularity #education #years #development
Online education is becoming more and more popular. Nowadays, it is developing very much. New courses are opening
day
 by
day
. All
people
 can
take
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gain
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 knowledge in the online
course
. These days, a lot of students think that
face to
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face-to-face
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face
 education is better than online
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.
However
, all students learn in their own way. There
is
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 a lot of useful sides
of
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to
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the
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apply
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online education. Some
people
 think that online
course
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courses
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is
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are
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 better than
face to
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face-to-face
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face
lesson
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. Many
people
 think
that
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 opposite.
Also
, so
much
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many
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 useful sides
of
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to
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 the online
course
. In my view, many
people
 believe
that is
 profitable the
face
 to
face
 study. Of
course
, all humans
also
 pay
a
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money for
a
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both
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lessons
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. Decades ago, online classes were not available. Nowadays, they are developing a lot. Of
course
, we cannot say that there are no harmful aspects of online classes. If the online
lesson
 is more than the norm. They can be damaged
due to
 the fact that our eyes are glued to the phone or computer.
In addition
, it can lead to excess weight
due to
 the fact that we lose weight in one place. In conclusion,
popularity
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the popularity
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 of online classes has
developing
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developed
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 significantly in recent years. These days, it is
popularity
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popular
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 so much. New courses are opening
day
 by
day
. Many humans can take part in the online
lesson
. But, many
people
 study in their own methods. I think, all students need
a
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their own
liked learn
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 ways and I agree becoming popular online courses.
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task achievement
Ensure that the introduction clearly presents the topic and your viewpoint on whether the rise in popularity of online education is positive or negative. Avoid being ambiguous and ensure clarity in presenting your argument.
task achievement
Focus on providing clear topic sentences at the beginning of each paragraph followed by supporting details and examples to strengthen the main points you're discussing.
coherence cohesion
Improve the logical flow of the essay by better organizing ideas. Use linking words and phrases to help the reader understand the progression of your points and the connections between them.
coherence cohesion
Create a more cohesive structure by grouping similar ideas together and developing each with explanations and examples.
task achievement
Ensure that the conclusion summarizes your main points and restates your opinion in a clear manner, reinforcing the argument you've presented throughout the essay.

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    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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