Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to local council. In your letter give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community describe the possible effects on local people if the centre close
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to express my concern regarding the sports and leisure centers, which will be closed soon as per the newsletter headline, I have read today.
As far as I and my family members are concerned, we are health conscious, so we love to go over there to maintain our fitness level and to spend our spare time.
Regarding the necessity of these centers
, the utmost reason is that these are located in the Change the spelling
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center
of the town; Change the spelling
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therefore
, local people can cover the distance by walking instead
of by any other transport. In other words
, these are easily accessible. Moreover
, cost-effectiveness is another plausible reason that makes these stadiums valuable for the whole community of our town.
closing these institutions, put untoward repercussions on well well-being of our society. People will become more lethargic and do not want to allocate more money to leisure activities since they will not travel so far as other sports stadiums are 10 km away from their native place.
would you change your mindset pertaining to the closing of these centers
? I would look forward to your prompt response as it is not only for me but Change the spelling
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also
for the welfare of society.
Yours Faithfully,
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Coherence & Cohesion
To improve the logical structure, ensure that your paragraphs flow logically from one to the next, with clear connections between them. Use transitional phrases to guide the reader through your arguments.
Coherence & Cohesion
For greeting and closing, 'Dear Sir or Madam' and 'Yours Faithfully' are appropriate. However, remember to include a comma after 'Yours Faithfully' before your name.
Coherence & Cohesion
To strengthen each paragraph around a single idea, begin with a topic sentence that sets the theme, followed by supporting sentences that expand on that theme.
Task Achievement
Task response could be enhanced by providing more specific details about how you and your family use the center, such as mentioning particular activities or frequency of visits. Additionally, offer clearer arguments about the center's importance rather than generic statements, such as mentioning specific community programs or events held there.
Task Achievement
Maintain a polite and formal tone throughout the letter to address the task's requirements adequately. Avoid using slang or informal language.