The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants
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The bar chart compares the number of
men
and women
in four different types of evening courses at an adult education centre in 2009, and the pie chart shows the ages of the participants
.
It is clear that
Language course
was the most popular option for women
and Painting was the most favorable course
among men
who attended the evening courses in that year. Moreover
, about half of the participants
are the older adults.
According to
the bar chart, Language, Painting, and Drama had more women
attendees
than men
. On the contrary
, Sculpture was the only course
with more men
than women
participants
. Overall
, Language has the highest proportion of attendees
compared to the other courses, with a total of 60 attendees
, while
Sculpture was the least popular course
, with roughly about 15 attendees
in total.
The majority (42%) of the participants
are 50 years
old or above, followed by the age of 40 to 49 (26%). Nevertheless
, attendees
with the age below 40 only make up to 32% of the total attendees
, with 16% being 30 to 39 years
old, 11% being 20 to 29 years
old, and only 5% being under 20 years
old.Submitted by skripsinana8 on
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