The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants
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The bar chart compares the number of
men
and Use synonyms
women
in four different types of evening courses at an adult education centre in 2009, and the pie chart shows the ages of the Use synonyms
participants
.
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It is clear that
Language Linking Words
course
was the most popular option for Use synonyms
women
and Painting was the most favorable Use synonyms
course
among Use synonyms
men
who attended the evening courses in that year. Use synonyms
Moreover
, about half of the Linking Words
participants
are the older adults.
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According to
the bar chart, Language, Painting, and Drama had more Linking Words
women
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attendees
than Use synonyms
men
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On the contrary
, Sculpture was the only Linking Words
course
with more Use synonyms
men
than Use synonyms
women
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participants
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Overall
, Language has the highest proportion of Linking Words
attendees
compared to the other courses, with a total of 60 Use synonyms
attendees
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while
Sculpture was the least popular Linking Words
course
, with roughly about 15 Use synonyms
attendees
in total.
The majority (42%) of the Use synonyms
participants
are 50 Use synonyms
years
old or above, followed by the age of 40 to 49 (26%). Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, Linking Words
attendees
with the age below 40 only make up to 32% of the total Use synonyms
attendees
, with 16% being 30 to 39 Use synonyms
years
old, 11% being 20 to 29 Use synonyms
years
old, and only 5% being under 20 Use synonyms
years
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