Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. They would like your adivce about finding a place to live. Write an letter to your friend. In your letter: describe where you lived recommend the best way to look for accommodation warn them of mistakes students make

Dear Arun, Hi, I hope you are doing well and everything is good for you. It's
great
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pleasure writing
this
letter.
Firstly
, I thank you for your hospitality, when I come to trip with your home town Delhi and surrounding areas
last
time. Can send me some photos
while
our vacation time captured by you
.
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Recently my house was renovated, so I plan to post a
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photo frame on my hall which you took photo in front of Tajmahal and over the water fountains side.
i
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searched for those pictures on my floppy disk it's
missed
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, I
am believed
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this
is
stills
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you
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keeping somewhere in your memory card. can find that one and send it to me soon? I eagerly waiting for answers,and glad to receive from you
good
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massage. Thank you with a lot of love. best regards, Varun
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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