The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in опе country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information Ьу selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re/evant.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in опе country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information Ьу selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re/evant.
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given line graph provides information about how many shops are closed, and
on the contrary
, how many brand-new stores are established in a country, over the
period
of 7 years.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that, at the beginning of the term, the number of
market
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which are opened is more than the ones that are closed.
In addition
, both of them experienced a falling trend.
While
, in the first year of the
period
, individuals tended to open
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,
at the end
of the duration, a greater number of stores closed. In 2011, the figure for opening shops was about 8500, and
then
saw a sharp fall to just under 4000, from
this
point on, it fluctuated until the rate levelled off at approximately 3000 in 2018. Turning to the number of stores that are closed, the rate started at just under 6500 and there was a small drop to about 6000,
then
it saw a few years of fluctuation until stood at the lowest rate in the given
period
around 500 in 2015.
After
this
year it rose dramatically to just above 5000
at the end
of the
period
.
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