The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in опе country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information Ьу selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re/evant.
he
given line graph provides information about how many shops are closed, and Correct your spelling
The
on the contrary
, how many brand-new stores are established in a country, over the Linking Words
period
of 7 years.
Use synonyms
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that, at the beginning of the term, the number of Linking Words
market
which are opened is more than the ones that are closed. Change to a plural noun
markets
In addition
, both of them experienced a falling trend. Linking Words
While
, in the first year of the Linking Words
period
, individuals tended to open Use synonyms
boutique
, Fix the agreement mistake
boutiques
at the end
of the duration, a greater number of stores closed.
In 2011, the figure for opening shops was about 8500, and Linking Words
then
saw a sharp fall to just under 4000, from Linking Words
this
point on, it fluctuated until the rate levelled off at approximately 3000 in 2018.
Turning to the number of stores that are closed, the rate started at just under 6500 and there was a small drop to about 6000, Linking Words
then
it saw a few years of fluctuation until stood at the lowest rate in the given Linking Words
period
around 500 in 2015. Use synonyms
After
Linking Words
this
year it rose dramatically to just above 5000 Linking Words
at the end
of the Linking Words
period
.Use synonyms
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