The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020.

The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020.
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The given bar chart compares the old of the citizens of a certain territory from 1990 to 2020.
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, what stands out from the graph is that people who experienced the age of 25 to 54 were the most than other groups over the given period.
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, all the age groups saw a downward trend or stayed approximately at the same rate, except for 25-54. In 1990, the 25 to
54 year old
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people had the highest rate of the population at just above 30 percent.
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the figure witnessed an upward trend until peaked at just under 50% in 2020. If we look at the ratio of population for infants to
14 years old
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14-year-old
teenagers, at first there was a slight drop of about 1 % and after
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it levelled off at close to 20% in 2020. With respect to other age assemblages, as for 15-24, there was a falling trend and ended up at almost 8%. Turning to 65 and over and 55-64, both reached
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around 13 and 10
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, respectively.
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