The pie chart below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.

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The pie chart illustrates the number of spending by each family in

Japan

and

Malaysia

in 2010.

Overall

, there was a different expenditure between the two countries regarding needs. Housing and Food were far less spent in

Japan

rather than in

Malaysia

while

Transport,

Health

Care

, and Other Goods and Services were spent more in

Japan

To begin

, Transport,

Health

Care

and Other Good Services percentage rates are higher than in

Malaysia

, followed by 20% and 29%.

However

Health

Care

and Transport percentage in

Japan

was two times bigger than in

Malaysia

by 6

percent

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and 20

percent

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On the other hand

, the other aspects were slightly lower than in

Malaysia

In Contrast

, the highest percentage of expenditure in

Malaysia

was Housing followed by Food and Other Goods and Services followed by 27% and 26%. Even Though, the proportion rates of

Health

Care

Malaysia

was the smallest among the others by 3

percent

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per cent

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