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The pie chart below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.

The pie chart below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.
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The pie chart illustrates the number of spending by each family in
Japan
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 and
Malaysia
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 in 2010.
Overall
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, there was a different expenditure between the two countries regarding needs. Housing and Food were far less spent in
Japan
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 rather than in
Malaysia
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while
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 Transport,
Health
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Care
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, and Other Goods and Services were spent more in
Japan
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.
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, Transport,
Health
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Care
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 and Other Good Services percentage rates are higher than in
Malaysia
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, followed by 20% and 29%.
However
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,
Health
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Care
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 and Transport percentage in
Japan
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 was two times bigger than in
Malaysia
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 by 6
percent
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per cent
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 and 20
percent
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.
On the other hand
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, the other aspects were slightly lower than in
Malaysia
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.
In Contrast
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, the highest percentage of expenditure in
Malaysia
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 was Housing followed by Food and Other Goods and Services followed by 27% and 26%. Even Though, the proportion rates of
Health
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Care
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 in
Malaysia
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 was the smallest among the others by 3
percent
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per cent
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, malaysia, health, care with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household expenditures
  • proportion
  • cultural differences
  • economic differences
  • living standards
  • real estate market
  • public transportation
  • private transportation
  • infrastructure
  • government healthcare policies
  • quality of life
  • holistic view
  • inflation
  • economic growth
  • societal norms
  • globalization
  • communication expenses
  • education expenses
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