The line graph shows the Population in the state of Oregon by county. Three counties that incresed in population between 1940 and 2000, Columbia, Yamhill and Washington had shown the different increasing.

The line graph shows the Population in the state of Oregon by county. Three counties that incresed in population between 1940 and 2000, Columbia, Yamhill and Washington had shown the

 different increasing.
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The line graph illustrates the
population
in the state of Oregon in three different countries Columbia, Yamhill, and Washington from 1940 to 2000. Which started from 1940 to 2000 by a year period in each data point.
Overall
, it is undeniable that the
population
growth of three countries. Washington significantly rose and was higher than others.
However
, Columbia and Yamhill slightly go up and have apparent similar trends.
To begin
with, the
population
of Washington started at 75 in 1940 and quickly climbed to 125 in 1970. In the next year rapidly grew again to 245.
On the other hand
, the
population
of Columbia showed a moderate increase from approximately 28 in 1940 to 32 in 1970.
Although
in the final year depict sharply soared to 75.
Moreover
, In the section of Yamhill, there was a
slowly
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up from 30 in 1940 to 45 in 1970. In 2000 there was a
steeply
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steep
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jump to 90.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demographics
  • Census
  • Migration
  • Infrastructural development
  • Economic impact
  • Urbanization
  • Rural to urban shift
  • Growth rate
  • Satellite cities
  • Migration patterns
  • Local economy
  • Population density
  • Service provision
  • Housing market
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Population spike
  • Sustainable growth
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