The table and the bar chart below show the survey data of how and where 1,600 Australian students used computers.
The provided table and the bar chart depict the information about the habit of using computers of 1,600 Australian
students
between 2001 and 2002. Use synonyms
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increased
students
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students
preferred using Use synonyms
computer
at home.
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To begin
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students
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percent
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per cent
in
the total researched Change preposition
of
students
used online facilities. Use synonyms
However
, only 20 Linking Words
percent
used the Internet to submit assignments. The next year, Change the spelling
per cent
students
using the Internet experienced a proliferation at 96 Use synonyms
percent
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per cent
while
the figure for Linking Words
students
submitting homework saw a five-fold increase to 1568 Use synonyms
students
.
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that using Correct your spelling
clear
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a computer
the computer
computer
at home was Fix the agreement mistake
computers
top
choice accounting for the highest rate throughout Correct article usage
the top
researched
period at 800 in 2001 and over a little bit 1200 in 2002. Add an article
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students
using Use synonyms
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computer
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computers
slight
decrease trend Correct article usage
a slight
by
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of
students
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lacked
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computer
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computers
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