The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The pictorial diagram illustrates the recent construction of the Islip town and its future developmental plan.
Overall
, it can be seen that there will be dramatic changes take place in future except for schools which will remain the same. In the present map, the town has a very simple design which contains the main
road
in the middle and shops on either
side
. The west
side
of the
road
leads to the school and's opposite
side
leads to the park and there is
housing
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a housing
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system in between.
However
, in the
future
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future,
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the main
road
will be replaced by the dual carriageway which surrounds the whole village. On the North
side
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side,
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the country area and shops will be converted into a huge shopping centre
along with
bus
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a bus
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station and car park on either
side
.
In addition
, towards the North East
direction
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,
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there will be a new housing scheme developed.
Moreover
, the main
road
will be replaced by a pedestrian street so, no vehicle entry will be permitted in that area.
On the other hand
,shops which are located towards the South
direction
will remain as it is. In terms of the park , its size will be reduced
due to
the new housing system towards the South-East
direction
and the older
house
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houses
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will moved to the West
direction
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Small town
  • Centre
  • Development
  • Maps
  • Plans
  • Introduce
  • Topic
  • Purpose
  • Essay
  • Description
  • Current
  • Key features
  • Facilities
  • Advantages
  • Positive aspects
  • Benefits
  • Proposed
  • Changes
  • Improvements
  • Suggested
  • Potential
  • Course of action
  • Summarize
  • Opinion
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