The chart below shows the percentage of people accessing news via different media in one country in 2013, 2015 and 2017.

The chart below shows the percentage of people accessing news via different media in one country in

2013, 2015 and 2017.
The chart illustrates the distribution of
news
consumption across various broadcasting platforms in a country for the years 2013, 2015, and 2017.
Overall
, there was a notable increase in the number of people accessing
news
through radio and the
Internet
,
while
viewership for
television
and
printed
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media experienced a significant decline during the specified period. In 2013, approximately 32% of individuals received
news
via the
internet
and radio, with both platforms showing similar levels of engagement.
While
radio experienced a slight decline in audience in 2015, it eventually saw an upward trend in 2017, reaching around 36%.
On the other hand
,
internet
news
readership increased by nearly 8% in 2015 and continued to rise, reaching just under 70% by 2017.
Television
and newspaper consumption accounted for approximately four-fifths (80%) and two-fifths (42%) of the total audience in 2013, respectively.
However
, there was a consistent decrease in the proportion of newspaper readers, plummeting to 30% in 2015 and
further
declining to 22% in 2017.
Television
viewership
also
experienced a decline of roughly 15% in 2015
,
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but showed a slight increase of 5% in 2017. By 2017,
television
viewership
equaled
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that of
internet
news
, both standing at 70%.
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