the table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
The given table compares the proportion of
consumer
spending in three different categories Use synonyms
at
five different countries in 2002.
From the table, Change preposition
in
it is clear that
the Food/Drinks/Tobacco Linking Words
category
has the highest percentage of spending, followed by Use synonyms
Clothing
/Footwear Correct article usage
the Clothing
category
, and Use synonyms
Use synonyms
consumer
spent the least Fix the agreement mistake
consumers
at
Leisure/Education compared to the other categories.
During the given period, Change preposition
on
Use synonyms
consumer
in all of the five countries spent most of their money Fix the agreement mistake
consumers
for
Food/Drinks/Tobacco, with Turkey as the nation with the highest Change preposition
on
Use synonyms
consumers
percentage (32%) and Sweden as the least (15.77%). Change the noun form
consumer
Next,
Linking Words
the
clothing/footwear was the second Correct article usage
apply
category
Use synonyms
which
Change preposition
in which
consumers
spent most Use synonyms
their
moneyChange preposition
of their
into
, with Italian Change preposition
apply
consumers
(9%) as the highest Use synonyms
spender
in Fix the agreement mistake
spenders
this
Linking Words
category
, and Sweden as the least (5.4%). Use synonyms
Lastly
, Linking Words
Leisure
/Education Correct article usage
the Leisure
category
has the Use synonyms
fewest
percentage of Correct word choice
lowest
consumer
spending compared to the other categories, with Turkey Use synonyms
consumers
(4.35%) Use synonyms
had
the highest consumption in Wrong verb form
having
this
Linking Words
category
, Use synonyms
in contrast
with Spanish Linking Words
consumers
(1.98%) as the least spender.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumer, category, consumers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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