The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.
The
chart
displays the amount of pineapples exported by three
countries that produced the most in 2009 and 2019.The pie Correct article usage
the three
chart
indicates data for the costs that contributed to the consumers in 2019.
Overall
, the first country
had the highest increase in outflow
of pineapples from 2009 to 2019 and stayed the highest Correct article usage
the outflow
at the end
.Unlike for
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country
number B, it begin
with being the top exporter and was the only Wrong verb form
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that
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one
the
numbers got lower.Correct article usage
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Moreover
, the last
country
had a small uptrend in the period of 10 years.Also
, based on the pie chart
, the cost
of distribution and retail had the biggest shate
.
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share
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To begin
with, conutry
number A started from less than 2 million tons to slightly more than 10.Correct your spelling
country
Furthermore
, the second country
total exports went from more than 4 to less than 2 million tons.
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country's
Nonetheless
, the last
country
almost stood the same with a little increase in outflow yet still to stay lower than 2 million tons in total.
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, 35% of the cost
contributed to distriution
and retail continued by taxes and international Correct your spelling
distribution
trasport
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transport
cost
with each at 16 and 12 per cent. whilst the Fix the agreement mistake
costs
proft
took place at only 18%, the Correct your spelling
profit
importat
licences had 10% of the total share.Correct your spelling
important
import
Nonetheless
, the producer and export cost
had
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cost
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