There is an annual work party next month, which is held every year. Write a letter to your colleagues to co-arrange the party. In your letter: -Say what would you do differently than last year -Say what you think were some of the things not so good last year -Suggest where to meet to plan for the party.
Dear Aleesha,
Hope you are doing well, how long since we
are meet
Wrong verb form
met
toughter
. Correct your spelling
tougher
together
On next
month we are Change preposition
Next
planned for
our annual work party. The manager Wrong verb form
planning
select
me as the programme secretary, but I need your support too.
We should definitely do some verity of activities on Wrong verb form
selected
this
time than past years. I think
, plan a live DJ Correct pronoun usage
think we
instead
of some kind of recordings
. Amal and Aneesh Fix the agreement mistake
recording
are sing
very well.
The game sectionChange the verb form
sing
in
Change preposition
apply
last
year was very hesitated
. At Replace the word
hesitant
last
it leads to Add a comma
last,
fight
. So, we can do some other things more than that.
Shall we conduct Correct article usage
a fight
this
programme on the new conventional centre in Niagara.
There we get enough space for dancing and playing Change the punctuation
?
while
conducting this
DJ.
We can meet on coming Friday in
Change preposition
at
birthday
celebration of Arun. On that Add an article
the birthday
occation
, we may finalize our party plans.
Loving,
Correct your spelling
occasion
Fency
StanlyCorrect your spelling
Fancy
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Content
For task achievement, make sure your letter directly addresses all points asked in the prompt. Clearly state what you would do differently this year, what wasn't good last year, and your suggestion for a meeting place to plan the party, using distinct paragraphs for each point.
Structure
Improve coherence and cohesion by organizing your ideas more logically and clearly. Start with an introduction, follow with a paragraph for each main point, and conclude appropriately. Use transitional phrases to smoothly connect your ideas.
Tone
Polish your greeting and closing. A more formal or consistent tone might be suitable depending on the context. Ensure that your greeting is appropriate for the relationship with your colleagues and that your closing effectively signals the end of the letter.
Focus
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea relevant to the prompt. This will help the reader follow your arguments more easily and make your writing more persuasive and coherent.
Language
Proofread your letter for grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors to enhance clarity and professionalism. Consider using tools or asking a friend to help review your writing.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,