The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given map illustrates the transformation in Grange
Park
from 1920 to its present state.
Overall
, it can be observed that
while
the stage for performing music plays, fountain, glasshouse, cafe, and pond were deconstructed, the northern rose garden and entrances of both the north and southern sides remained in the same place. Surprisingly, an entrance for parking lots located underground of the
park
was built in the east-southern zone of the present
park
. Looking at the changes on the western side of the
park
more closely, the stage for musicians was repurposed into the new arena for concerts;
moreover
, the fountain located in the
center
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of the
park
in 1920 was replaced by the rose garden and surrounded by seats that once we're settled in other parts of the western area. On the eastern side, the pound once used for growing some water plants has been moved to the
park
's southern side for water features and replaced by playing fields for children.
Furthermore
, the rose garden, close to the pond in 1920, has been transformed into a cafe next to the northern entrance gate.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pond
  • northwest corner
  • large central open area
  • residential areas
  • community-oriented space
  • playground
  • eastern border
  • parking lot
  • convenience
  • commercial zone
  • amenities
  • walking path
  • encircles
  • joggers
  • accessible
  • entrances
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