You recently spent a weekend with your friend in her/his new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: •explain what you like about his new house •describe what you enjoyed most about your stay •suggest when and where you could meet next
Dear Rave
I was really happy to spend time in your new
house
. I was very enjoy to play with you.
As you know your new house
is very big and cozy. Especially your bedroom nice and comfortable. In addition
, your house
's courtyard is very big and there are many different types of flowers especially red roses. Moreover
, your house
's location is really good and near the city center
. I like it.
Do you imagine how I enjoyed Change the spelling
centre
this
stay? I like your mom's dishes. They are very tasty. Especially soups. I have never eaten like this
soup.
Moreover
, your brother is a nice boy. He gave us her old toys!
If you accept my request, I am going to visit again your new house
. Maybe next weekend or next Friday. Next time I will bring my toys and we will enjoy.
Yours faithfully
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Coherence and Cohesion
To improve your coherence and cohesion, try organizing your ideas more clearly. Begin with a clear introduction to what the letter is about, follow with a paragraph for each of the key points you’re making (explaining what you like about the new house, describing your enjoyment, and suggesting the next meet-up), and conclude with a summary or a closing statement. Make sure each paragraph transitions smoothly into the next.
Task Achievement
To enhance task achievement, ensure you address all parts of the prompt thoroughly. For instance, while you mention liking the house and enjoying the stay, adding specific examples or more detail about why you enjoyed the visit could make your response more complete. Additionally, when suggesting a next meeting, offer more concrete plans or alternatives to make the proposal more engaging.
General advice
Consider using a variety of sentence structures and vocabulary to make your letter more interesting and to demonstrate a higher level of language proficiency. Avoid simple errors by checking your grammar, especially the use of possessive pronouns ('her old toys' should be 'his old toys,' assuming you’re referring to the brother) and article usage ('a nice boy,' not 'a nice boy.').
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,