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The table below gives information about student enrolments at Bristol University in 1928, 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about student enrolments at Bristol University in 1928, 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the data about student enrolments at Bristol University and
divided
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 into two categories from 1928 to 2008.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the average number of enrolments showed a huge increase, and the total of students’ origin places
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 a reverse trend. Since the beginning, the average rate has been rising from 218 to 1,046 and
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, it reached 6,377 in 2008.
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 the percentage of female pupils decreased by 10%, it
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 rose from 32% to around 55% which
higher
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 than
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male’s
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 percentage (46%) in 2008.
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,
men’s
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 rate witnessed a slight rise before it dropped to below the other group. Meanwhile, in the 1920s, the majority of pupils came from places around Bristol; afterwards, it fell significantly to barely 2%
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 the end of the period.
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, the number of overseas people
to study
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studying
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 at Bristol started at 5% and they came from three different states. After that, there were 24 new countries and even though the rates did not
levelled
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level
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 up significantly, almost 30% of individuals came from 98 countries.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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