The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time.

The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time.
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The given maps illustrate school development between 1985 and the present condition.
Overall
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, it is noticeable that the number of
classrooms
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has been increasing
due to
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the significant increase in the school population.
Moreover
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, some new facilities have been introduced to the school areas. The most interesting feature that emerges is the total number of
classrooms
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. Back
then
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, there were only two
classrooms
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, each on the road's left and right sides. The one that was located on the east side had two storeys. At present, there are three classroom buildings, and one is being upgraded into a three-storey block. The new classroom building was built next to the new sports facilities with the expense of a library and playing fields.
As a result
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, the size of playing lands is reduced.
On the other hand
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, some parts of the library turned into a learning resources centre with a computer room inside.
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, the car park and
classrooms
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initially
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located on the eastern side of the library have been removed, leaving a piece of unused land. Meanwhile, the office and main parking area remained unchanged, with some modifications in the shape of the car park.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
Vocabulary: Replace the words classrooms with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Layout
  • Significance
  • Accessibility
  • Expansion
  • Facilities
  • Trends
  • Priorities
  • Modernized
  • Well-being
  • Sustainability
  • Transportation
  • Innovative
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