a museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpiad work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you because I saw your advertisement for volunteer positions at the local History
Museum
. I would love the opportunity to help out at the museum
.
I have always enjoyed learning about our town's past. Visiting the museum
is one of my favorite
things to do. I think it is important for people of all ages to learn where we came from.
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I am still in school, I have some free time available on weekends and some afternoons during the week. I am a good worker and willing to help with any tasks that need doing. Some of my interests include meeting new people, giving tours, and learning new skills.
I hope you will consider me as a volunteer. I promise to be reliable and do my best for the museum
. Please let me know if you need any other information from me. I look forward to hearing back from you.
Thank you for your time.
Yours sincerely,
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Task Achievement
To enhance your task response score, consider providing more specific examples of the skills and qualities you have that make you a good fit for the museum volunteer position, such as past volunteer experiences, specific areas of interest in history, or any relevant skills like public speaking or customer service.
Coherence and Cohesion
For improved coherence and cohesion, consider using more varied connective words and phrases to link ideas more smoothly between sentences and paragraphs. Additionally, a brief mention of how long you are willing to commit to volunteering could add value to your application by showing your dedication.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite