The maps compare the village’s development of Stockeford in 1930 and 2010 within 80 years.

The maps compare the village’s development of Stockeford in 1930 and 2010 within 80 years.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The maps reveal the changes between 1930 and 2010 in Stockeford village. The development generally consists of
construction
Add an article
the construction
show examples
of new
sub
Add a hyphen
sub-roads
show examples
roads
Use synonyms
, the rise in the
number
Use synonyms
of
houses
Use synonyms
and some facilities and the elimination of farms. There
number
Use synonyms
of subroads and
houses
Use synonyms
grew significantly. The maps show that there
there
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
are two new
sub
Add a hyphen
sub-roads
show examples
roads
Use synonyms
constructed on the North side of the main road, one above the primary school and the other one above the post office.
Then
Linking Words
, a square-like
sub road
Add a hyphen
sub-road
show examples
is branched from the main road below the post office and a single one in the place where there had been gardens in 1930.
Subsequently
Linking Words
, The
number
Use synonyms
of
houses
Use synonyms
has a sharp growth after building accommodations on both sides of newly constructed
roads
Use synonyms
and a few in the gardens. The map
also
Linking Words
reveals that some changes occurred in the facilities of the village. All the farmlands and shops had been destroyed and replaced by
houses
Use synonyms
or
roads
Use synonyms
until 2010 and the garden area got smaller. At the same time, the large house transformed into a retirement house and there are some shops.
Overall
Linking Words
, The changes mainly consist of the strike in the
number
Use synonyms
of
houses
Use synonyms
, new
roads
Use synonyms
, and the elimination of farms and shops.
Submitted by mohamad.sanaye462 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words roads, number, houses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: