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The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.
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The bar graph provides information about the illiteracy rates of
males
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 and females in six different states in the preceding year.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the female illiteracy
rate
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 is higher than
males
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 in all regions,
while
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 the proportion of the uneducated population was higher in South Asia and lowest in developed countries.
According to
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last
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 year's data, developed countries showed the lowest illiteracy
rate
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. Approximately 22% and 28% people of in Latin America and East Asia are unable to read and write, with women showing the greater
rate
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.
however
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, the
rate
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 rose significantly in the remaining case. In South Asia, around 55% and 32% of women and men were uneducated respectively,
whereas
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, in the Arab States, approximately 52% of females and 29% of
males
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 are illiterate respectively.
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, in the Sub-Saharan States, about 48% of females and 32% of
males
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 lack literacy.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words males, rate with synonyms.
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