The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries

The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries
The international trade statistics of three specific countries are set out in the line graph above, which indicates the rise and fall over four years. The general overview depicts two notable trends. On the one hand, a striking resemblance between two gradual waves of the overseas market in
Colombia
and
Japan
;
On the other hand
, Myanmar with sharp ups and downs over three main pullbacks in 3 years in a row. Myanmar had experienced an inconsistent export market by the year 2003. To expand,
this
country increased the rate from 0 to 800000000$.
Furthermore
,
this
land reached another summit and added more than a hundred
million
dollars
to the previous number.
However
,
this
record didn't
last
for a long time and had a significant setback in just a year from more than 900
million
dollars
to less than 400
million
dollars
. The
last
shown fluctuation refers to 2002 to 2003 with a steady pullback of around 100
million
dollars
.
According to
the graph,
Colombia
and
Japan
rose
similarly
.
While
the rates overlapped once in 2000 and approached about 500000000$, the
overall
incline moved separated but parallel. As an example, achieving 650000000$ and 600000000$ in
Colombia
and
Japan
in respect in 2001.
Also
, a consistent decrease occurred over two years.
Japan
met 500
million
dollars
,
while
its competitor
Colombia
decreased to 600
million
dollars
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words colombia, japan, million, dollars with synonyms.
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