Whether or not someone achieves their aims in life is mostly a question of luck? To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that achieving goals in
people
's lives depends on their luck
. However
, I completely disagree with the given statement.
To begin
with, there are many reasons why I am against this
statement. The first reason is that when people
achieve their aims, hard work and enormous physical contributions have besides
in it. Without investing time, and effort physically and mentally it is impossible to get success. For example
, Elen Mask is the richest person in the world, because he spends a lot of effort to achieve his goals, not depend on luck
. Secondly
, with best effort also
needs ability. This
can be low or high. For instance
, economically sufficient support for a person makes them more self-dependent and creates more concentration on their aims.
Moreover
, though luck
is important for people
's lives, in contrast
, family plays a crucial role in achieving the target destination. When support comes from individuals families people
can take it as an inspiration. As a result
, they spend more time doing hard work than other time and finally
get good output. Furthermore
, society works dramatically to achieve aims for any person. such
as people
who want to participate in any goals that are also
helpful for the community. If they get support it is easy to achieve whereas
it is not possible if they depend on luck
only.
In conclusion, although
luck
is a part and parcel of an individual's life. In my opinion, it is hard to achieve without other crucial things. Because those things are ultimately more important than luck
.Submitted by ema on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Task Achievement
Ensure a clear and succinct thesis statement in your introduction to directly address the essay prompt. Further, explicitly state your position (agree or disagree) to enhance clarity.
Coherence & Cohesion
Incorporate a wider range of linkage words and phrases to improve the flow of ideas between sentences and paragraphs, thereby enhancing the essay's coherence.
Task Achievement
Introduce specific, concrete examples to support your main points. This will strengthen your argument and make it more persuasive to the reader.
Coherence & Cohesion
Proofread your essay to correct minor spelling and grammatical errors, such as 'Elen Mask' instead of 'Elon Musk'. These small mistakes can slightly detract from the overall professionalism of your essay.