The graph shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The given graph illustrates the
number
of shops
that were closed and open in one country between 2011 and 2018.
It is clear to note that the number
of shop closures and openings fluctuated wildly and overall
had a downward trend.
In this
period the number
of shops
that closed decreased for
about 3 times from 8500 to 3000.Change preposition
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By contrast
the number
of new shops
experienced a small reduction from 6500 to 5200. Although
opening numbers from 2011 to 2014 and from 2016 to 2018 were gradual, in 2014 it experienced a 7 times fall, a sharp decline, and a dramatic increase in 2016.
Even though closure numbers were higher than openings at the end
of the period with both declined in numbers, but number
of new shops
was relatively more.Submitted by dnm.best on
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