The diagram below shows a small local museum and its surroundings in 1957 and 2007.
The given diagram illustrates a small local
museum
and its environmental change between 1957 and 2007. Generally speaking, this
museum
was extended to accommodate the facilities and became bigger.
Firstly
, in order to develop the area of the museum
, the trees in the garden that surrounded the museum
were cut. The area of the museum
storeroom and local history room was replaced by a cafe and reception. The developed local history room will become larger and reallocated take
the place of the national history exhibition. Fix the infinitive
to take
Furthermore
, the special exhibitions and education centre will be added.
Moreover
, a new place located on the left side of the reception was the museum
shop. The new entrance was set in the museum
shop instead
of the entrance hall in the past.Apart from that, a car park was added next to the road for visitors to parking.Submitted by callachan8 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words museum with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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