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The graph below shows the number of short-term vistors to Austrilia from 4 different countries from 2010-2017.

The graph below shows the number of short-term vistors to Austrilia from 4 different countries from 2010-2017.
#vistors #austrilia #countries
The graph below illustrates the
number
 of
visitors
 from four
differenet
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different
part
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 of
world
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 The USA, China, France and Australia to the Royal
British
Museum
 in ten years between 2000 and 2010.
It is clear that
 Australia had the lowest total of
visitors
 in all ten years.
According to
 the graph, In 2000 China had the highest rate
exactly
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 300,000
visitors
go
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 to the Royal
British
Museum
.
However
, In that year France had the lowest
number
 of
visitors
approximatley70,000
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approximately 70,000
 people. But, In 2010 that country had the highest same figure of
gustes
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gusts
 exactly 300,000 folks.
In contrast
, In 2006 and 2007 The USA had the same
number
 of
visitors
 to
go to
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the Royal
British
Museum
 approximately 260,000 people.
Moreover
, In 2001 and 2005 Australia had the same total of
visitors
 (about 150,000
individual
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).
Overall
, It is obvious that China started 300,000
number of
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gustes,
while
 after
during
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ten years in
2010
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2010,
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 that country had 150,000 total
of
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visitors
 likes 2009. But, France had the lowest
number
 of
gustes
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guests
 to go to the Royal
British
Museum
,
wherase
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whereas
where
 in 2010 that country had the highest
number
 of
visitors
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, british, museum with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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