Many people use their phones for sending text more than talking. What are the reasons for this? Are there more advantages than disadvantages?
Nowadays, sending
text
is more common in many individuals than talking on Add an article
a text
the text
phone
. There are multiple causes behind Add an article
the phone
this
: like it is time saving
and Add a hyphen
time-saving
cost effective
. It will be discussed in the following paragraphs. I believe that texting Add a hyphen
cost-effective
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has
have
more benefits than harms.
Life is running Correct subject-verb agreement
has
on
a very fast pace, today. Everyone is busy in their life. But, gadgets have Change preposition
at
make
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made
people
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people's
life
easier by providing them with different forms of communication. Most Fix the agreement mistake
lives
of
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apply
the
humans, prefer to Correct article usage
apply
contact
their family, friends or colleagues by texting them. As,
it is convenient and Remove the comma
apply
above all
it is time saving
. To elaborate, in any meeting or any class, one can easily Add a hyphen
time-saving
contact
other
or reply by sending them Fix the agreement mistake
others
message
rather than Fix the agreement mistake
messages
talk
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talking
phone
call, which is Add an article
a phone
the phone
time consuming
and can be disturbing for others.
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time-consuming
Furthermore
, texts do not cost much, people can send multiple messages to their sender in the same amount as they spend on one call. For example
, in certain jobs you have to contact
thousands of people, therefore
you cannot call everyone and update them separately. In that case, to send
forwarding Change the verb form
sending
message
is a wise option, which not only Fix the agreement mistake
messages
save
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saves
time
,
but Remove the comma
apply
save
money as well. Correct subject-verb agreement
saves
However
, call
is necessary in certain situations like in Add an article
the call
a call
emergency
, Add an article
an emergency
it
is better to Correct word choice
so it
contact
directly
by call. Correct pronoun usage
you directly
Similarly
, important discussions should be discuss
on call which may create misunderstanding on chat.
In conclusion, calls and texts both have advantages, but Change the verb form
be discussed
its
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it
weight
more toward text as it is cheap and it save Correct your spelling
weighs
time
. Though
, Correct word choice
However
call
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calls
is
significant during serious Correct subject-verb agreement
are
crisis
and during essential dialogues among professionals.Fix the agreement mistake
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