Some people think increasing the cost of fuel is the best way to solve global environmental problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays,
people
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use a
lot
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of
fuel
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, because of the large number of cars, the impact of
fuel
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on the environment is very strong, but despite
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,
people
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continue to pollute the environment. Currently, various solutions are being considered by the government to prevent
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, an example of
this
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is the increase in
fuel
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. On the one hand,
people
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are consuming a
lot
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of
fuel
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, but they don't think that it has a negative effect on our country, and
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is the basis for increasing
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consumption, which is related to the destruction of the ozone layer in the atmosphere and the rise of various
smokes
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clouds of smoke
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into the air. It doesn't matter because there are a
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of poor
people
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in our country,
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, they need to go to the hospital. If the residents whose houses are far away want to ride on the street and ask for a shared price when they want to hail a taxi, it will be very difficult for the
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's lifestyle and cause a shortage of
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.
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, what can cause
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to use so much
fuel
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? An example of them is the smoke coming out of different types of industrial equipment, and there are a
lot
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of cars in our capital, so the knots
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cause the release of various wastes from the human body and nature, which affects the animal world and the plant world.
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, the bacteria that appear in the atmosphere have a negative effect on human life, which is a danger to the lives of our young
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and our elder grandparents. we will contribute to its recovery My conclusion
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dear
people
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, let us contribute to our lifestyle and environmental health and save our country from various calamities, in our own hands.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • emissions
  • alternative energy
  • conservation
  • mitigate
  • renewable energy technologies
  • affordability
  • collective action
  • innovation in energy efficiency
  • global cooperation
  • environmental measures
  • pollution
  • economic disparity
  • revenue
  • sustainable development
  • environmental sustainability
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